Juliana

United States of America

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Antiochian Orthodox Christian
17
Music major
Former homeschooler
Voice teacher
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The world, the flesh, and father smith
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Message to Readers

This is a sneak peek for a new short story I'm working on. It's gonna be kinda long, but I'm hoping it will keep the reader's attention.

A sneak peek

November 13, 2019

FREE WRITING

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Sometimes the growls and screeches were too much.
They would grow and swell until there was a sudden ring of silence. But Sam still held her breath because they often came back, rising and falling, and rising and falling, the last one always sounding worse than the first.
Sam couldn’t sleep on nights like these, and if there’s one thing she couldn’t stand, it was lying in bed doing nothing.

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3 Comments
  • Juliana

    Thank you! I finally published the first two parts of the short story that this is from. It’s called The Red Fence


    4 months ago
  • weirdo

    nice hook. really snags the reader’s attention. also, that last line is a whole mood.


    4 months ago
  • stravelbach

    Fantastic introduction, giving insight into the character without revealing too much of the plot. I'm excited to see what comes next!


    4 months ago