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I really liked the format of the 'story', how there were the coincidence and fate sections, they fit together really nicely. I also enjoyed the imagery, in a way it felt like I was there. There is just enough background information to know what's going on but also a sense of mystery that keeps the reader enticed and wanting to read more.
I'm curious as to the relationship of the characters have been throughout their lives, and how long it has been since they have seen each other. How old are the characters? How old were they when they last meet? Is this real or based on a real-life event?
The title was what really captivated me in the first place, the question marks seem really intriguing to me, you did a really good job with the imagery, and it is a really good piece!