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im not really a poetry person, so god knows where this came from. hope u like it and understand what I mean(I get it if u don’t this is kinda abstract) but please review, like, and comment. it really makes me day
This piece is really beautiful! The descriptions are so vivid and haunting. It feels so real; I love it!
There were a few lines that had a few mistakes, but overall it was very good.
Congratulations on winning the contest!