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Message to Readers
if you think about it, humans are the only species, that have been discovered, (gotta consider aliens and alien lovers) that can actually smile? why do we always frown then, we were given the ability to smile for a reason, so we should do it more often. fun fact, before one of my best friends knew me, she knew as "the smiley girl," which i found funny. i started smiling less when i got braces and even less when i started reading the news, but i still try and smile, you should too.
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"your bruises and scars are being tainted by the hands of those who made them. and the one that left you in the dust is now at your feet. the sun is rising, why don't you look up, wipe those tears, live in the present and forget the past? why don't you smile?, got me good honestly it touched me alot, I'm kind of breathless because of it.
Is the use of lower case for each line purposeful or accidental? Is this a poem? Prose?
It's beautiful and eye opening, the message along with the piece with humans as the only smiling species made me realize how complex and simple humans are.