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I really was just absorbed into this piece. The description, the suspense, everything just made me want to find out what happens.
The flashbacks and April's thoughts really absorbed me into her mind, and you portrayed her emotions very well.
I would have liked to know a little more about the end. Was it actually him there, or was it just a flashback? Is he imaginary, or a product of a trauma disorder? Really expand on that if it is.
The setting is very intimate, and the weather was a great detail. I didn't know exactly where it took place, but I feel like that would have taken away from the story a little bit, since it's so emotional.
This was a beautiful piece! The flow and pacing was practically flawless, and I especially enjoyed the flashbacks. You really immersed me into April's world. Seriously, keep writing!
This was amazing! I'm really glad I was given the chance to read it.