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The bit about the news profiting and the feelings of loss are so realistic, I love it, the piece is great.
I entered the Novel writing contest too and the 1,000 word limit is nervewracking but can you describe the bugs? I'm really interested, the monsters from "A Quiet Place' are all that comes to mine for me.
I'm not very miltitary savvy but I'd check up on the 'sailor' part, I'm not sure it's correct but I like the interaction between both all in all and be free to correct me if I'm wrong.