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Everything about it just... speaks to me. The first two lines really hit me hard.
No, it's already perfectly sad. Especially the quoted lines, those really deepen the idea.
I've experienced this feeling before. The person was special to me, but I wasn't the same for them. If this is about you, know that there is someone out there who will make you their number one. :) I wish I could hug you. :(