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Message to Readers
Please bear with me and encourage me. I would love to see all of you reading, commenting, reviewing and overall, liking my novel!!
The piece is short but says so much, you're very talented, I say Aurum and Caspian, his struggle, her new shot at life.
Who is Caspian? What is Caspian? What is his job? Why Aurum? Are they going to camp out in the woods and talk? Debrief?
Please keep writing despite of how others feel, if you love it, I'd hate for you to give it up, you have great ideas, people want to hear.