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Message to Readers
We were given freedom of speech, use it.
"The note whispered in her ear again, begging her to follow it, and she ran for it breathing hard." Caught my attention because of the way we all have something we have to follow it.
I was able to see the hope of things because we all have our frustrating times.
What made you think of the story and how to write it?
I thought it was quite good. Brings hope.