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Message to Readers
This is for Strangekid96's #Whatislove? contest as well as for AcetheticallyPleasing's contest. Go check them out!
Feedback is greatly appreciated. I don't mind harsh criticism at all, so be brutally honest :)
Everything! The tone, description, etc. is so engaging, and I have no idea why, but this made me want to cry!
I think you did an amazing job on this! I think it would be amazing to know what happened to their lover. Like ahhhhh!
I'm so sorry it took so long to finish your reviews, I've had so much stuff to do and my life has been super crazy!