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I love how this piece is so easy to relate to. It is beautifully written and is able to connect with the emotions of every single person who's ever cared about school.
I'd want to know more about your friends experiences, how your grades and progress in school generally (and maybe also what subjects you enjoyed and did well in) and how you felt in greater detail when you failed.
This piece is amazing :)