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I loved how real it was. You did an amazing job conveying emotion in such a way that the reader feels like they’re in the story.
I think you could possibly play to the love and loss of her mother. The sadness is fleeting, and I think it’s should draw out more before being resolved.
This is great work! I only found a few grammatical anomalies, but even with those the content was great!!