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I had no clue how to finish this one up so I just ended this one earlier.
Again, loved the continuation. I also loved the part with the baby dragon. You did a great job describing action, too.
Perhaps give more detail as to why the Godly Slacktongue suddenly stopped attacking them. It’s a little unclear.
Great story! Can’t wait to read more!