Peer Review by Stewart Worthington (Australia)()

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Him

By: Morgan Koekemoer


PROMPT: Illumination

There he stood, his hair wilder than his spirit and his smile, a smile thatis infinitely more beautiful than any jewel this world has to offer, a smile that will light the way in the darkest of times. Eyes that see everyone and everything's true beauty, they show the world in so much as a blink yet hide so much emotion - of sadness, happiness and love.


Peer Review

I loved the different metaphors (Jewel) used to describe in this piece.


How come they see what is hidden?


Reviewer Comments

Apart from some little grammatical errors, this is a brilliant piece with a lot of beautiful ideas. Keep up the good work!