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Message to Readers
I hope you all enjoy reading this piece as much as i enjoyed writing it. Thank you.
This piece does not promote suicide or self-harm. They are just random thoughts fathomed in my head. Thank you.
The hooded figure suprised me, that was a nice little twist.
Was it really a butterfly of death? Did the figure set out the butterfly to lure her over?
Can you help me come up with cool names similar to Aurum? It's quite a name.