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A weird middle school girl who loves writing & has no reason of doing this, just wants to know how good people think of her writing & how she can improve on it. I love reading & writing & got my inspiration to write from reading.

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If possible, I would like only positive feedback if possible, but if there is a really bad mistake that you absolutely NEED to point out, feel free to do so. I love looking at Peer Reviews, so go ahead & leave one please!

He Was There Again.

May 12, 2016

PROMPT: Quartet

There he was again, with his bushy merigold colored beard & pushed back hair, his tailored black suit was far too formal for him, his bulging arms barely fit into the petite suit & his voice was too raspy & rough. There was no way he would be able to become a businessman with that body he had.


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