Peer Review by Lilian McGhee (United States)

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By: Sarah Ferguson


On the other side of the wall lies a mysterious figure whose only wish is to bring me misfortune. A tall foreboding thing that arrives at full speed in front of me. With it evading my very attack I'm left helpless. My only chance is to try and overcome it by power of will. My head spins as I think of the power that I have over it. With a shaky breath I make up my mind of what I believe this creature to be. I open my eyes and, to my satisfaction, it's gone. This figure is no longer here and no longer has control over me. 

Peer Review

surprised me was how specific there fear was very instresting and different from others

i would like to know , is there anything else that could be scary too

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