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The piece lifts me up, it started with the 'I fight with my sisters', I of course said 'me!', and continued, the last three words also had me saying, 'me!'
I admire resilient families because I'm apart of one, I understand sometimes the reason we are resilient is something we rather not talk about so I won't ask but I do ask, who is Mary Beth? A dog? A cow? A baby? A zebra? A disabled sibling? I am insanely curious XD
The piece is awesome and it all ties together nicely, thank you.