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I really love all of the messages you packed into this piece! It's all so true and important. Also, I agree that in the festival season we should make sure we are thinking of those who are less fortunate, and do our best to spread happiness.
I think that overall you did a very good job of getting your ideas across. I just left some suggestions for how to improve the grammar in a few places, but other than that, it was great! :)
Good job, and keep spreading the positive messages! I loved reading your piece, and I hope that some of my comments are helpful to you. :)