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I would really appreciate if you took the time to comment and/or review this piece! I love feedback and am always open to suggestions.
ALSO, I wanted to come up with a different title for this. Any Ideas?
This piece is a perfect blend of all the elements. The cliff hanging end is something worth reading.
I want the writer to continue writing. I loved it. No doubt that you should stop writing this, the Queen of the Twisted Endings. (cheesy but true). It can be clearer in some places. I have just marked just grammatical errors.
Nice Plot.MUST-READ Piece.PLEASE continue with this story. Queen of the seas is the most apt title for it.