Victoria Martin

Canada

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Eye of the Storm

October 26, 2019

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  1. Thine eyes a grave to all my tenderness.
  2. Once openѐd an ever fixèd mark to hate.
  3. I loathe those depths where demons dance careless.
  4. To hide amid my gaze 'tis now too late.
  5. I watch as still the grey has yet to pass.  
  6. Those summer skies doth call thine eyes.
  7. I as Zephyr be, call a cloud alas
  8. A storm prevails to break thine earthly ties.
  9. Thine death remove of me adversity.
  10. Corrupt doth be as you had done to I
  11. Immoral acts against integrity.
  12. As He forgives mercy, I testify.
  13. With blood of thine I washèd all my sin.
  14. Yet dimmèd eyes stare uncertain.
Hey,
So of course I had a sonnet assignment. I submitted it and I know that not everything is perfectly on  iambic pentameter and all that but I was wondering what all you lovely WTWers would think of it. Hope you enjoy(:

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  • Tushar Mandhan

    It is my first time reading a sonnet after Shakespeare. And yeah, I loved it!


    20 days ago