"ending a sentence with a preposition is something up with which i will not put."
republished for the heck of it???
Written By: r|A|i|N
November 16, 2019
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engaging stuff this is! loved it!
this is so beautifully complex. your figuratively language is godly.
hi i'm jackson ;)
like, "and tainted like addiction, the thought of being stuck; when i inhale, i feel it lodging in my brain like the west-side garbage dam" connects with "doctors pulled...drugs out of our pockets" its so AMAZINGLY WRITTEN!!!
this is so good!! wow!!!!
yeah, me too, i really hesitated at that, but then it looked really awkward
This piece is magnificent in ways i cannot express. The metaphors and imagery are absolutely outstanding. “ treasures stained and second-hand,
and they returned with smiles and
never enough” “ gulped the wood-brown water with tiny cheekbones” “ lodging in my brain like the west-side garbage dam” and the last two stanza s. Very, very well done! Keep up the fantastic work:)
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