Galactic_Dreamer

Latvia

just on write the world for help with school writing.

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lowercase (most of the time. people keep trying to "reform" me, and it seems to be working)

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Message to Readers

so, K. Marie Christen and I wrote this together and you might have seen her publish it a while ago. but we did write this for a school project and I always love ways to hear how i can make my writing better.

Krakatoa Rap

October 25, 2019

FREE WRITING

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Hey, I’m Krakatoa,
Just like the Mauna Loa.
Except I’m stratovolcano
And not a shield, yo.
And Loa’s in Hawaii
But I’m here in
Indonesia
Just a broken caldera

The last time I erupted,
Was in 1883.
I killed so many of yee,
I destroyed me.

My island was broken 
into so many pieces,
Even created my child
Who erupted in --- 2018.

But back in 1883
When I lived in the Dutch
East
Indies,
I erupted for two days
And killed 36, 417 people.
Oh, wow, did I amaze

Now I live by
Sebesi,
Serutung,
And
Sebuku.
Near Java
And Sumatra
The king of my country.

So in summary,
I’m Krakatoa.
The Mauna Loa of
Indonesia, yo.

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  • Starflower

    :) This is really pretty funny... not many people write about volcanoes. Good job!


    7 months ago