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Does it convey the magic of kindness in seemingly ordinary situations
The way the rain is described as something that influences you a lot is absolutely beautiful. I love how you described rain like 'tears', like 'blood'... It makes me feel like the rain has come to live.
The tone of this story is soft but powerful. By choosing words that describe what the rain can do, such as making one think or bringing warmth in the coldness... The story is almost magical.
Gives this story a happy, bright mood, makes me imagine a place where everyone is laughing and covering for each other, sharing a deeper bond.
As a person who love rain very much - I love this piece of work. You have done a great job!