Peer Review by Fernweh (India)

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Words

By: zalma


PROMPT: One-Liner

They left me trembled, my soul shaken, my mind in perfect chaos, and my identity scattered.


Peer Review

This one-liner is something to which I relate on a personal level. There have been so many instances when I have doubted myself and let other crush my identity. This aphorism captures this ugly truth of life in a wonderful combination of words. Honestly speaking, it is mesmerizing how vulnerable we are, so easily we can be scattered and crushed simply by somebody else's thoughts about us.


Reviewer Comments

Hey zalma! I find this piece of yours incredibly beautiful. I have always liked to read deep and meaningful one liners and I can tell yo that this is one of the best I have read.
Keep on writing and expressing yourself!