Peer Review by aditi (United States)

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Our Eyes

By: Aurelia.Valus


FREE WRITING

As long as there is light
We can see in the dark.

A single drop of light
Is all it takes
For our curiosity to be peaked
And the wonders and luminosity
Within the tiniest speck of light
To forever gleam.

A single drop of light
Is all it takes
For our desires to be realized
And the hopes and aspirations
Within the tiniest speck of light
To forever glow.

A single drop of light
Is all it takes
For the darkness to cease
And the motivations and ambitions
Within the tiniest speck of light
To forever shine.

As long as there is light
We can see in the dark.


Message to Readers

I would really appreciate if you took the time to comment and/or review this piece. Any feedback is always welcome!


Peer Review

The part where you say- a single drop of light is all it takes for our curiosity to be peaked- I think that's really creative and outside-the-box thinking.


I think the concept of using light to see through the dark is emphasized really well.


Reviewer Comments

Great work! I completely agree with the statement.