Aurelia.Valus

United States

Most of my stories are based off of my dreams (weird right?)

School, sports, and work keep me busy so I don’t post a ton :(

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I would really like if you commented and reviewed this piece. Any feedback is always appreciated! :)

The Crime of Dreaming

October 22, 2019

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Is it a crime to dream
Of the elegant sky 
And the sun rising 
On a path that leads only to infinity.

Discovering castles and leading adventures 
into the sacred dawn
Flying away with all but faded hopes
Of a world that lasts only in a dream.

Endless lakes of secrets and love 
Filling hearts till they can’t hold another drop
Though dreams fill up the entirety of the mind.

Imagine a benevolent night
 Of Moonlit flowers and masquerade balls
Getting lost in a serene sea of forever sleep
And drifting off into the afterlife and oblivion.

Cruel and abhorrent judgement 
Of the world in a dream
Atrocious and ruthless punishment
And it was believed 
That it was not a crime to dream.
I made this a long, long time ago. I really wanted to add to it as well. So...Yeah.

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2 Comments
  • HermioneGranger67

    I love the rhythm and description in this piece! It's very peaceful and calming! Thanks for sharing!


    almost 2 years ago
  • BurningMidnightOil

    Shouldn’t the period at the end of the first stanza be a question mark instead? Your imagery is lovely as is the entire aura of this piece. Well done!


    almost 2 years ago