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Here's a poem I wrote on the base of Robert Frost's poem, The Road Not Taken. I tried to keep it in his format, except my second stanza broke the rhyme scheme of ABAAB to a weird ABCAA. Anyway, PLEASE give me feedback, I really need it.
I liked the vagueness of the traveler and the doubt he had in his mind. I was delighted to see how well you had related some important truths about life in this poem.
I have mentioned two lines where i felt you were not being very clear and slightly off the track or not using the perfect wording. But please don't take these suggestions of mine seriously because I am not qualified to verify your work. Just follow your instincts and you will write beautifully.
Overall, the poem is a nice spin-off of "The Road not Taken".