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I would say that is a poem about the things you enjoy in life.
The last line, without a doubt.
The line where you said, "Eat peanut butter off the spoon - chunky above all,/ including God herself, processed to Hell/ and back." Were you saying God is chunky? Or is He processed "to Hell and back?"
Only the use of "God herself." Either change "herself" to "himself" or "God" to "Godess"