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Message to Readers
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This piece is inspiring because it encourages people to step away from snap judgments. I love your message because it's so important. There are so many people who feel bad about themselves because they don't fit in, and it's important to move away from our first impressions and try to get to know those people better. I've tried this a few times, and I've usually found that the people who don't fit in are often the ones who are the best and truest friends.
Is this one of your experiences, or is this fiction? Either way, it's really good. I think it would be nice if you told the readers more about why the narrator was disturbed so much they couldn't sleep. What caused them to change their ideas about this girl? But anyway, it was amazing, and I love the title.
Hopefully this review is helpful for you! Sorry it took me so long to write it. I've been buried in an avalanche of schoolwork lately. Also, sorry about all the highlights about comma placement. I'm picky about that sort of thing, but those are just minor details. Anyway, this piece was spectacular, and I really enjoyed reading it! :)