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Message to Readers
Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
After reading this piece, I feel motivated to view people in a different light. Think about them with a clear head and try to observe their emotions. This ability is something that is currently lacking in our current generation. We need to be more sensitive, more compassionate and most importantly, more human. Being emotional is not being weak. It is a sign of strength. A sign of how deep you are. People really need to understand this.
Did something similar happen to you or to someone whom you know? Or maybe you just came up with this issue? If yes, then what made you take up the issue even if it had nothing to do with your daily life?
This is a wonderful piece. You are an aspiring writer and capable of doing more great work. But never forget that there are many writers here on this website who are struggling for support just like the protagonist in your piece. They need help too! And we all are like a family here!
Great work! Keep writing!