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It's very unique! I love the image that it brings to mind, especially when you go deep into details such as the "cuffs of your jeans" or the beginnings of the lines. It captivated me, which is why I chose this piece to review in the first place!
I’m just curious what the reason for the capitals and accents and lowercases is, I don’t think I quite understood how it added or emphasized your writing the way you see it, but it was a cool stance to take! Also, as I mentioned a few times in the comments, see if you can use words that sound different but also flow and connect easily rather than words that will flow because of the similarity but also hold back on the variety of the vocabulary.
You made this piece stand out a lot to me, with the title and the capitals and accent, which is awesome! It’s unique and beautiful, great piece! If you don't mind, could you answer to the few questions I had in the comments and right about too? Thanks, amazing writing, you definitely have the art and talent of a poet :)