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Message to Readers
Testing the waters of fantasy. How did I do? All reviews are welcome.
I especially loved the ending! I think it gives the reader a sense of belonging, while it also has the affect to make the reader wonder who the woman is.
I'd like to know how he/she ended up on the side of the ocean. Who is the woman? Where did she take him?
Well done! You write such interesting stories! Never stop writing.