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I just really want to know :)
I love how you have just published this, to have it as a free piece, where people can collaborate!
Just a tip. on the highlighted part, you made me think at the start of the sentence there would be many reasons but there's only one. Maybe just fix this up :)
Thank you for writing this piece, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing it! I hope you find my feedback useful, but do remember its only my opinion, some parts of where I believe could be improved, you may disagree with it and that’s totally fine!