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Okay, so I didn't know how to end it, but what do y'all think?
I honestly love this one, and I like how you incorporated little parts of you into it... like pizza and root beer!
oh lol this was supposed to be for a list thing. There is a free writing section just to letcha know!
I loved the story, and how I could get into Casandra's head. I just suggest explaining David more, and definitely keeping this story going if you want!