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This is for DaBolo's #hybrid contest and amohn04's #tellastory contest. Go check them out!
Feedback is greatly appreciated. I don't mind harsh criticism at all, so be brutally honest :)
The way you made it related to Pokemon was really cool. Though I can't tell which Pokemon it is based of off.
Try to describe them a bit more. Also I feel like it was lacking a true plot. Try to make it more of a story. I can't really tell you how as I don't know, but still it should be done.