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Message to Readers
This is for DaBolo's #hybrid contest and amohn04's #tellastory contest. Go check them out!
Feedback is greatly appreciated. I don't mind harsh criticism at all, so be brutally honest :)
I was surprised by this. It's not often I see a story that reminds me of another book, and or a person. This reminds me of FIRELIGHT by Sophie Jordan. Close enough anyway.
I would like to know more of there creatures. What is their origin? Do they live on another planet? From the way it's said, is the character saying she isn't free?
Beautiful story Good job! <3