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Message to Readers
This is for DaBolo's #hybrid contest and amohn04's #tellastory contest. Go check them out!
Feedback is greatly appreciated. I don't mind harsh criticism at all, so be brutally honest :)
This is great! Really beautiful and deep
I'd like to know more about the Xarae... if you ever write more about them, please, notify me!!!
Thank you for entering my contest and stay tuned for the results!