Peer Review by Rachel Joy (United States)

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The depresion

By: Nerdy_Girl


PROMPT: Paint Swatch

10, the clolor of depression.
a blue, black, and red mixed together.
The color you see when you cry, when u die.
The color you love, the color you hate,
do you like it, or do you not?
That is the question.
 


Message to Readers

do you like it, is it sad?


Peer Review

I like the way the author asks a question that could totally change the way that the reader views their color.


I would paint a journal this color because it makes me want to express myself.


Reviewer Comments

This is really good and though provoking!