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how good the story is, does it need more detail, should it be shorter/longer.


May 10, 2016

She walks along the old and dusty cobblestone path while talking to herself snow dotting the path, "Why, why, why would this happen, why did he have to d-d-die", she stutters with the words and falls to her knees,her thick blond hair is falling out of the ponytail and falling loose, tears are streaming down her face,"WHY!" she screams, "WHY!". Her stone cold hands grabs a pile of snow, she throws it and falls, her head hitting the path, blood is streaming down. She takes her last and final breath.


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