Peer Review by Hartsock2 (United States)

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Cell Dust

By: CG

PROMPT: Paint Swatch

Cell dust, a color found in our deepest desires, the farthest nerve in our brain, only seen when we have reached a hundred percent capability. The ones who see this color slowly begin to drift away until they are but a speck of light. A speck so miniscule that the most powerful god himself cannot find it.

Peer Review

I would say that the last sentence really has an impression on me. It has a lot of meaning to it. It is a powerful line.

I am not sure. I would probably use it to decorate a ceiling or something similar.

Reviewer Comments

I must admit, this is a very interesting color. Continue the good writing!