Peer Review by Layla Carrington (United States of America)()

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Strength From Unity

By: Saman


PROMPT: Sijo

Alone in this sea, clouds rolling in, I will surely sink here.
Then lights on the horizon; growing closer, ever closer...
I'm united with those once like me, and we can weather the storm.


Message to Readers

Criticism is always welcome!


Peer Review

The image that comes to mind from this sijo is a little boy out in the middle of the ocean on a raft after his boat sank that his mom, dad, brothers and sisters on it and none survived. So he's kinda hoping to die so he could re-unite with his family.


After I read this, it left me wondering if he survived or if he re-united with his family..


Reviewer Comments

This was a great sijo it made me feel and see an image.