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Criticism is always welcome!
The image that comes to mind from this sijo is a little boy out in the middle of the ocean on a raft after his boat sank that his mom, dad, brothers and sisters on it and none survived. So he's kinda hoping to die so he could re-unite with his family.
After I read this, it left me wondering if he survived or if he re-united with his family..
This was a great sijo it made me feel and see an image.