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Message to Readers
the irony has only just occurred to me
I was thrilled and chilled by your stunning use of imagery to convey (what I’m assuming) a message of the changing a of seasons.
Who are “they”? The humans, the fools, the parasites? This ambiguity adds to your imagery, but providing closure and an antagonist to the small story you’ve told could make the piece that much better.
Can’t wait to hear your thoughts on my work! Hope I wasn’t too harsh.