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When you describe how you watched your Mother add the ingredients, I could see myself and reminded of my own childhood of childishly watching my mother prepare food. When you describe "Bubble Bread" I am honestly captivated by how delicious it sounds.
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I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece! Some additional things and advice from me is to add more descriptive details. I think by adding more description such as sensory details it'll definitely make the imagery of your piece pop.