Peer Review by Sushi In A Tuxedo (United States)

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Future

By: Cooked Cod


PROMPT: One-Liner

Why worry about your future, when there may be none?


Message to Readers

criticize me until i criti-cry.


Peer Review

I like how you worded this. It really is dramatic. It just slaps you right in the face.


Reviewer Comments

"Worry" should be replaced with a stronger word. After you say "worry about your future", I feel like it should instead say "when there may not be one".