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Are we nothing more than the sum of our emotions that we feel towards one another?
There is truth to what you say. We are what me make of ourselves.
It gives off a somewhat lonely impression, the fact that our emotions are what define us.
I like how it is concise and to the point. You are able to express your ideas in a productive manner.
Good job! I like it :)