Peer Review by Julia ♬ (United States of America)()

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Moon, Marsh, Manhattan

By: A Rose


PROMPT: Arctic Dreams

It's hard to have a dream in no particular space--think about it, have you had a dream without a setting? All my poems come back to my homes: the cities, swamps, islands, and views that make up my life. We don't want to accept it, but it's true, where you shapes you. 


Peer Review

I really like the title of your piece and how you used alliteration to tie it all together.


This might be hard to do, but I think that if you linked the idea of dreams from your first sentence to the idea of poems in your second sentence it would flow better.


Reviewer Comments

This is a really good piece, and I think it explains and responds to the prompt pretty well. Keep writing! :)