Peer Review by slee.belle (United States)

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Scars

By: Robert Snider


PROMPT: Illumination

Her long black hair flowed down over her deliberately casual outfit. Her clothes were consistently ripped, a representation of her heart after fifteen long years.


Peer Review

I love how they describe this little review really well. It makes the reader grabs it attention.


How does the clothes constantly ripped in this little short story.


Reviewer Comments

It makes this so deep I love it.