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Message to Readers
Just looking for people to review my posts. Truthful, please!
I was touched by the deep meaning that was displayed by this piece. At first i thought it was someone leaving their significant other but then i read on and it was in the footnotes where i understood the true meaning of this which is truthful and honest.
I don't think there is a need to deepen it but i would love to see more humanity related topics. I have tried writing on humanity and have a piece called Divided Perfection but it is no where as good as this.
I would love to read more so please do continue writing <3