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I know this isn't really a writing piece, but like, b u t t e r c h i c k e n. And yes, I don't have precise measurement because, well, I'm in school. To those of you who have never had butter chicken you're missing out on a LOT!! To my fellow desi (I'm Pakistani) peeps, hmu on your favourite dish!!
Honestly I love how as a teen we can relate to the style of writing you have, like it really is super interesting to see that it;s not very formal and easier to be more interested into making your buttered chicken:)
So did you grow up eating buttered chicken or was it something that you recently started eating and decided to continue to eat and like decide to give the recipe out?